Wednesday, 2 November 2016

Hide and seek

  


Quick Charlie!
Come on, you know where to hide.
Quickly, jump in the prickle bush.
Oww the prickles poke into you 
and tear you.
Your heart pounds, it is a drum.
When will they come?

You need to get closer into the bush.
You see the seekers pass.
You hear twigs snapping under your feet, 
making a loud snapping noise. 
They can't see you, if you can't see them.

“I thought I heard whispering” 
I hear the teachers say. 
The teachers use their super-eye perspective.
They are coming 
Will they see me here?
Then all of a sudden 
BOOO!!!
“Found you Finn and Charlie!”




























































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































Hide and seek  


Quick Charlie!
Come on, you know where to hide.
Quickly, jump in the prickle bush.
Oww the prickles poke into you 
and tear you.
Your heart pounds, it is a drum.
When will they come?

You need to get closer into the bush.
You see the seekers pass.
You hear twigs snapping under your feet, 
making a loud snapping noise. 
They can't see you, if you can't see them.

“I thought I heard whispering” 
I hear the teachers say. 
The teachers use their super-eye perspective.
They are coming 
Will they see me here?
Then all of a sudden 
BOOO!!!
“Found you Finn and Charlie!”





























































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































1 comment:

  1. I love how you used strong verbs it was amazing. You really made me hooked to the
    Last verse. This made me feel like a really good hider. Keep writing Finn because your amazing at it. I can realate to this because I also did the hide and seek game and I know how hard it was.

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