Monday, 15 February 2016

Kaikoura



Kaikoura

Where the ocean showers the beach 
with the soapy shampoo
When it  leaves every wave behind.

Where the waves slap the ocean floor 
many many times
collapsing sand onto the wholes. 

Where the seagulls squawk 
to the other seagulls
saying "Hey that's my fish! Get away."

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I am learning to use many sentences using personification 
I am going well because I wrote 3 sentences using personification for example When the ocean showers the beach with the soapy shampoo when it washes up on the beach.    
My next step is to make my personification connect well with the object.




3 comments:

  1. I like it how you used personification, like we're the ocean showers the beach with soapy shampoo when it leaves every thing behind. I recon it was a really good poem
    I recon it is relational.

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